The writer of the week is...
Ella!
Ella has written a fabulous poem about Autumn, using all of her senses. Ella has worked really hard to improve her handwriting, and remember her finger spaces. She has also included describing words to make her poem sound more interesting.
well done ella i love you witting it is good
ReplyDeletei love ellas riting weii done ella love millie
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ReplyDeleteEmre I lice you work
This is Ella,s mommy and i am very impressed with Ella,s writing, I am glad to see she is doing well in her new school.x
ReplyDeleteThank for your comments, i like my writing. x
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful piece of writing Ella. You have made me homesick. Living here in Bangkok we don't have Autumn and it is my favourite season. The way you have mentioned the leaves and fireworks is excellent. Well done.
ReplyDeleteTo Ella i love your poem from bethany
ReplyDeleteElla I love your writeing it is beutiful
ReplyDeleteWe think your poem is great Ella.
ReplyDeleteto ella i love your powim from Bethany
ReplyDeleteella's writing was great
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