This week's writer of the week is...
Emre!
Emre worked really hard to write a brilliant senses poem. The thing that stood out for me was his spectacular use of wow words (he even used a thesaurus to find some of them!) However, as you can see he also remembered to start each idea on a new line, he used a range of punctuation and he remembered to use lovely, neat handwriting. Well done Emre!
Wow, what a great poem Emre. I can see you have really thought about what to write. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteEmre, this is a great poem, I love all your wow words, you tried really hard with your spellings and your handwriting is amazing you even have some joins, well done!
ReplyDeleteCool dude, love the use of your big words. Keep up the good work!
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ReplyDeleteEmre your Writing is amazing!!!
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Deletei like emres work
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this Emre! You should be really proud of your efforts. I especially liked your poem because you've mentioned chocolate! yum yum!
ReplyDeleteMiss Wilson - KS2 Teacher, Gloucester, England
I like my writing.
ReplyDeleteFantastic neat lovely writing Emre I just love your Fantastic neat lovely magnifisunt writing.by the way i loved the versis aspeshaly taste.
ReplyDeletewow Emre ceep it up
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ReplyDeleteI think you wrote betuful.
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a lot of lines.
I like your pikchers and your vidyose
ReplyDeleteI like wut you are lrning.
ReplyDeleteErme's writing was cool :o)
ReplyDeleteemres work is gud cipitup
ReplyDeleteEmre I think you area great poet.When you grow up I bet you'd be a pritty nice poet.Can you write another sences poem like that one.I love this poem you deserved writer of the week and if you get it again I want it muuuuuuch BETTER than this poem.
ReplyDeletewell done Emre great writing.
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