Monday, 17 September 2012

Writer of the Week

This week our writer of the week is...

Olivia!

Olivia wrote a fabulous set of instructions for making a smoothie. She included a "you will need" section, used bullet points and numbers, and used bossy verbs and time words in her instructions. Well done Olivia!




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8 comments:

  1. Luke mum18 September 2012 at 08:18

    Wow!!!! What a great piece of writing Olivia, well done.

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  2. milliem20 September 2012 at 19:08

    olivia THIS IS AMAZING I love looking at your loveley neat writing well done olivia i just looooove looking at your riteing so so soooooooooooooooooo much.

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  3. Olivia's mum20 September 2012 at 21:11

    Well done Olivia, what lovely writing. Mummy is very very proud of you. What a clever girl

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  4. Kate21 September 2012 at 00:53

    Its really cool how you got to make smothies.I like olivas reicipie.

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  5. Lucie and millies mum23 September 2012 at 21:48

    Well done Olivia... Love from lucie and Millie's mum.

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  6. Chloe's Mum25 September 2012 at 16:39

    fantastic Writing Olivia Well Done :)

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  7. Emre1 October 2012 at 16:14

    Wow brilliant writing.

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  8. miichael and leah11 October 2012 at 11:48

    ilic a oliivs wwc

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