Friday, 18 May 2012

Lighthouses

This week our Unusual Building has been Lighthouses.

In literacy today we wrote our own lighthouse poems, we came up with some fabulous descriptions!

We decided to share some of our poems with our blog readers.

Please read the coments to see our poems. You can also add your own poem, or give us some feedback on our work!

15 comments:

  1. Lighthouses are bright as the sun,
    like a candle.
    Candy Canes there to guard the ships from the rcoks safely.
    As tall as a cliff.

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  2. Bright as the sun,
    Shining like stars.
    As tall as a cliff.
    Shiny jewels
    Colourful wrapping paper.

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  3. Guide ships home like a rope pulling you home.
    Reaching for the stars.
    Shines brighter than the sun.

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  4. Lighthouse
    Standing proudly on the treacherours cliffs,
    Rocks as sharp as knives and guards to protect it.
    It shines as bright as the sunlight.
    It's as tall as a giant pulling you home safely.
    It is a pattern like a stocking or a candy cane.
    It is something pulling and stretching to reach the wonderful stars.
    It shimmers and glimmers in the darkness above.
    It is something that flashes in the darkness and chases the night away.

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  5. A lighthouse is like a red and white lollypop light up the sea like a sun in a window.
    It is as tall as a giant that also guides you back home from the sea.
    The lighthouse guides your boat away fromm the rocks the rocks are as sharp as knifes.

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  6. this is my poem
    Lighthouse

    The light is a dog chasing away the darkeness,
    A mystery to be unfastened.
    A giant strreching for the stars,
    A jewel glimering and shimiring at sunset.
    On the very point of rocks as sharp as knives,
    The pattern a glazed cookie.A yelling cat,
    A stomping soldier guiding you home.

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  7. Standing prouldy on the steep rocks,
    As tall as the Eiffle Tower.
    Reaching for the the moon,
    It is taller than 500 castle's stacking up is lighter than 123 jewles shining in the air,
    So britly to gide the ships safly home.
    Like butifull pattens.
    It is Like candy lines flashing

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  8. Strips like a lollypop.
    Tall like the Eiffle Tower.
    shines like baem of light,
    guiding ships home.
    Stands on rocks as sharp bas a knive.
    Reaching gracefully for the stars.

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  9. As brigt as the sun,
    Giding salors safeley home.
    As bright as shimering light,
    Heding for the stars.
    As night gose round ,
    It shimers in the darknes

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  10. Isabella Beatrice18 May 2012 at 14:08

    Light houses
    A light house is as tall as a giant,
    beeming flashes of light.
    A light house is as light a commet ,
    shooting through the stars.
    Stand on the shivring,
    wavy sand.
    As stripy as ice crem with blue and white sauce. By Isabella

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  11. LightHouse
    as tall as the Eiffel tower.
    standing on a rock
    as sharp as a knive.
    streaching graceforle for the stars.
    sparculs like julse gloing.
    guids ships home.
    stripy as a lolypop
    by tristan.

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  12. i LOVE writing poems espcialy when i do it with my class i realy enjoyed it

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  13. Light houses
    light houses have a bright star,
    light. shining like a lovley bright star,
    in to the dangusley black sky.
    It shins like a stripy lolly pop and like a
    shining into the terifieing black night.
    It is big like a masive giant.
    by elaina

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  14. i loved doing my peomim and my mum loved them

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  15. These poems are exceptionally good and I am so pleased you are working hard. I think you have really enjoyed writing these poems - marble in the jar!

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