Our last winner was...
Lucie!
Lucie wrote a fabulous "In the Universe" poem, with some amazing descriptions. A highlight of her poem was her fantastic use of similes. Here is her poem...
In the Universe...
The Angel falls is a wall of fresh, clean water, it is stunning.
In the Universe...
The Great Wall of China stands there and poses like a statue.
In the Universe...
Pluto sits and thinks and thinks about all of his memories about being a planet.
In the Universe...
The Cartwheel Galaxy is spinning in circles like a ballet dancer.
The Angel falls is a wall of fresh, clean water, it is stunning.
In the Universe...
The Great Wall of China stands there and poses like a statue.
In the Universe...
Pluto sits and thinks and thinks about all of his memories about being a planet.
In the Universe...
The Cartwheel Galaxy is spinning in circles like a ballet dancer.
Earlier in our "Space" topic...
Hannah
wrote a fabulous riddle to describe a planet. She used her knowledge from her science work, and combined it with some marvellous descriptions to create her riddle.
brilant Hannah I love your writing from Bethany
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